| Naomi ( @ 2009-11-03 23:33:00 |
NaNo Revision Update
One of the things that was clearly wrong with the book as it stood was that it got started much too slowly. So, I pretty much scrapped the opening and wrote a fresh version that kicked things into gear a lot more quickly. For example, Heike no longer has to drive down to Chicago to get the Ark; it shows up at her door via UPS. (Actually, I need to check and make sure UPS is plausible and it wouldn't necessarily be the USPS or FedEx.)
Yesterday was fabulously productive; I wrote 3,000 words.
Today was less so. I sat down to at least poke at it a little and was going to knock off for the day with a token effort; then I checked to see how many words I'd written and it was 97. That was only three words short of 100, so I went back to add at least a few more, and wound up writing 443 total for the day. Since that's only 57 words short of my standard daily minimum goal when I'm being self-disciplined, I suppose I should go back and keep working, but I've reached the end of a scene and the new scene is going to require a bunch of rewriting instead of writing fresh, although when I look at it tomorrow I may decide it needs to be written fresh, too. We'll see.
I'm 5,871 words / 21 pages into the new version of the novel, and it currently stands at 92,410 words total.
One of the things that was clearly wrong with the book as it stood was that it got started much too slowly. So, I pretty much scrapped the opening and wrote a fresh version that kicked things into gear a lot more quickly. For example, Heike no longer has to drive down to Chicago to get the Ark; it shows up at her door via UPS. (Actually, I need to check and make sure UPS is plausible and it wouldn't necessarily be the USPS or FedEx.)
Yesterday was fabulously productive; I wrote 3,000 words.
Today was less so. I sat down to at least poke at it a little and was going to knock off for the day with a token effort; then I checked to see how many words I'd written and it was 97. That was only three words short of 100, so I went back to add at least a few more, and wound up writing 443 total for the day. Since that's only 57 words short of my standard daily minimum goal when I'm being self-disciplined, I suppose I should go back and keep working, but I've reached the end of a scene and the new scene is going to require a bunch of rewriting instead of writing fresh, although when I look at it tomorrow I may decide it needs to be written fresh, too. We'll see.
I'm 5,871 words / 21 pages into the new version of the novel, and it currently stands at 92,410 words total.